April 20th, 2013, 1:00 pm

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this bounty hunter is my kind of scum
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Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 30th, 2013, 2:34 pm


Alex: But I don't miss you ...

Jane: One of the fighters has it the bridge! / Everyone out! Quickly!

Alex: Too late, Onoda ... if I let this grenade go, we'll both die! / My mission is to come and get you, and bring you back to our ship. Climb in and come along with me ...

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Reply Lavabat, April 20th, 2013, 6:34 pm

Very gutsy on Alex's part.

And I hope the hole her fighter put in the ship is air tight. :3

Reply Skydancer (Guest), April 20th, 2013, 8:51 pm

I'm trying to get my suspension of disbelief working again. A shuttle might be able to punch through battleship armor, but only by acting like a sabot - and it wouldn't be exactly able to back out and fly away again afterwards.

Reply Wolfie_Inu, April 25th, 2013, 8:40 am

@Skydancer: Well it is a purpose built boarding craft so it can get thru the armor. As for backing out, well... heh... XD

However, I get what you're saying re: suspension of disbelief. This part of the plot got more rewrites than was healthy for it. But I'm trying to speed it up a bit.

@Lavabat: not quite airtight, but close enough. Given that explosive decompression / space as irresistible force are myths across a one atmosphere gradient.

Reply Lavabat, April 25th, 2013, 6:39 pm

@Wolfie_Inu: I knew that. Who said I didn't? :P

Reply Wolfie_Inu, April 26th, 2013, 2:03 am


*points randomly*

He did!

*runs away*

Reply Lavabat, April 26th, 2013, 5:06 am

@Wolfie_Inu: I sentence him to death by roo bears! *sets some trained drop bears onto the guy*

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