March 16th, 2013, 1:00 pm

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in space no-one can hear you explode
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Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 16th, 2013, 1:13 pm


Jane: Main cannon ray concentration at 30%, target directly ahead! Cannon batteries, double broadside! / FIRE!

Crew member: All targets neutralized, Admiral Onoda!

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Reply Lavabat, March 16th, 2013, 10:04 pm

It would seem that the Om-Ankh suicide ships forgot that in space everyone can move in three-dimensions.

And is it just me, or does Jane look evil without pupils?

Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 17th, 2013, 1:40 am

@Lavabat: Or the Om-Ankh just weren't counting on Jane using guns for attitude control :P

And yeah, that's the idea behind her lack of pupils. To look weird and evil-ish. ^.^

Reply Lavabat, March 17th, 2013, 1:42 am

@Wolfie_Inu: I would have though attacking a battleship would have been a surefire way to get shot at personally. :P

And you succeeded in making her look weird and evil-ish! ^_^

Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 17th, 2013, 1:56 am

@Lavabat: Well, real-life kamikazes were used to attack battle ships, and Jane had to use some creativity to maneuver her ship in a way that goes beyond its normal capabilities. So I think we can safely say that the Om-Ankh didn't see this coming at all.

Reply Lavabat, March 17th, 2013, 1:57 am

@Wolfie_Inu: Ok! You have me there!

Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 17th, 2013, 2:14 am

@Lavabat: Hey, I'm glad when readers follow along and think things through :)

Reply Lavabat, March 17th, 2013, 2:25 am

@Wolfie_Inu: Thanks! Also, loving the Skitzo Tech!

Reply Skydancer (Guest), March 17th, 2013, 3:16 pm

Yeah, you noticed the paper printout too? Dunno why you'd have paper on a starship...

Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 17th, 2013, 3:42 pm

@Skydancer: I was thinking it would be a kind of running diagnostic of the whole Jane/computer interface thing. If something bad happens, they'll have a running physical record of the lead-up to it.

But yeah it doesn't have to make a ton of sense, it's more just to keep the "Schizo Tech" vibe going :)

Reply Adagio, April 10th, 2013, 3:24 am

O_O Die oë kan ek jog hanteer... maar die drade wat uit haar kop uit groei... *shivers*
as dit 30% rag was, will ek nie ann die verkeerde ant van daai een se 100% wees nie...
ek was so betjie afwesig, maar jy was omtrent besig? 9 strokies! haha! awsome, soos altyd!

Reply Wolfie_Inu, April 11th, 2013, 1:37 am

@Adagio: Dankie man! :D

30% vs. 100%: Dit verwys na hoe gekonsentreerd die straal is; die totale krag bly dieselfde, maar dit word meer of minder gefokus. Dus is 30% 'n taamlik wye straal wat minder skade doen. 100% sou ongelooflik baie skade doen, maar net 'n paar sentimeter in deursneë wees.

Oë en drade: jy gaan nog baie kans hê om uitgecreep te wees oor die volgende paar bladsye! XD

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