Wanvertroue

March 29th, 2012, 2:00 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
Nee, die titel is nie 'n fout nie. Dis aspres. En dis veronderstel om "deep" te wees, of so iets. Maar nou ja.
Author's Comments:

Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 29th, 2012, 2:57 pm

Hierdie denkbobbeltjies (of wat mens hulle ookal noem) is maar eksperimenteel ... besluit maar self of dit werk of nie ...

Hierdie speel tans in die agtergrond.


These thought bubbles (or whatever they're called) are a bit experimental ... decide for yourself whether they work or not ...

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TRANSLATION:

PANEL 1
Louwrens: (thinks) You knew ... you knew all along! How is it possible? / To save you would be suicide ... / It'd be the easiest thing in the world to just turn around and walk away ... / ... / ... no. I simply can't. I can't look you in the eyes and leave you to die ... / I'm not like that ... / Maybe I'm stupid ... or weak ... but ...

PANEL 2
Louwrens: (aloud) Give me your hand ...

PANEL 3
Louwrens: So um, while you don't have a gun right now ... / May I ask what you're planning to do next?
Jane: ... of course! And that is ...

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User's Comments:

Reply GabrielsThoughts, April 1st, 2012, 2:04 am

I like how the thought bubbles work... and look. However, I think it would be a good Idea to go for the standard three bubbles to the head for one of the bubbles. I never particularly liked clouds anyway, in comic strips at least. I enjoy clouds in the sky when they protect us from the sun.

Reply Wolfie_Inu, April 2nd, 2012, 6:09 pm

@GabrielsThoughts: Heh ... yeah, I don't like thought bubbles either ... they just seem silly, I dunno.

Also point taken with the little bubbles pointing somewhere ... but I'm lazy ... what else is new :P

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