Three Can Keep a Secret

February 16th, 2012, 4:00 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
if two of them are -
Author's Comments:

Reply Wolfie_Inu, February 16th, 2012, 4:42 pm

HOERA ONS SIEN UITEINDELIK WEER DIE PROTAGONIS!!!!!!1EEN

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TRANSLATION:

PANEL 1
[Two weeks later]
Well then ... the decision has been made ... / It's a shame that I can't trust anyone with this ...

PANEL 2
Louwrens: Oh! Hi! I haven't heard from you in a long time ... / Ha ha! Yeah, that's also true ... / How is it going still, especially after those stairs? Probably quite stiff and sore, right?

PANEL 3
Jane: Not really, I'm feeling a lot better by now ... / Listen, I have ... important things to discuss with you ... it's not safe over the phone ... where can we meet up? / Somewhere secluded ... where sound doesn't travel far ...

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Reply Eye_Contact (Guest), February 24th, 2012, 8:19 am

The eyes have it More suspense! At least, we know Jane doesn't know our Om Ankh visitor is one of 'them', but still... And on the picture side of things, the eyes in panels 2 and 3 communicate a lot to the reader, as in quite a few previous episodes. His: rolled back, guarded, thinking back. Hers: determined, fixed on the future meeting. Well done!

Reply Wolfie_Inu, March 1st, 2012, 5:37 pm

@Eye_Contact: Thanks! That's what I was going for, so I'm glad that it worked. It's still a bit hit-and-miss at this stage whether an expression ends up the way I wanted it when I started...

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